Hmm
I'm afraid it's not too good. There's a great bunch of Mario spoofs and to compare you need to work on a lot of things:
- Pauses are too long, it really slows down. Make it much smoother.
- Better, more inspired and nuanced (sp?) voice-acting
- More fitting music
- Basically, more intrigue. This preview is too short to actually be able to decide if it's going to be interesting in any way.
Well I gave this a 2. But if this gets through, make an effort for the sequel to be much better.
ok thx for the advice ill take this stuff into account
Meh
I'm sorry, but I've seen the evil, anti-children Santa too many times now. This was predictable, went on far too long and well - unnecessary.
Well I've never seen it, which is why I made this, you misery.
Needs work
I protected this, but when it gets through, I think you should edit some things, or at least improve in a 3rd part:
- The sound is indeed crappy. Way too much bass, it sounds very hollow and distorted. I think the whole thing might need a different song, without vocals. This takes away the focus and besides, I fucking hate it :)
- The screen is blank several times, that really slows things down. Link the parts together and maybe have more "line evolutions" going on at the same time, that would really increase the replayability. Work to a climax of some kind. Way more than this will not be too much.
Good luck!
Why do you hate the song? Oh well, thanks for the reveiw. I left some parts blank so it wouldn't get so repetative, which I failed at.
Promising
Your previous response screwed up the page.
Anyway, nice idea, but I couldn't understand a word. Hence the 0 for humor, I have no idea what's going on. But it's probably very good to experiment more with this clay stop-motion.
This is like... 11 months old.
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Now, all you did was emphasize how abortion ends a life that has already begun. Which is of course sad. You on the other hand only put emphasis on how terrible it looked. And that is nonsense. The embryo's aren't tortured to death, but you make it seem so. I don't know where you got the pictures from but normally they don't let the embryo or pieces from it pose with a coin after they're done.
That said: abortions most of the time aren't performed to keep the unborn baby from leading a happy life. Imagine a girl who got pregnant after a rape. Imagine her raising a kid that wasn't conceived in love and causes her pain of memory everytime she looks at it. A lot of kids nowadays are raised pretty badly, you know. Think about that.
"You on the other hand only put emphasis on how terrible it looked. And that is nonsense."
- It makes perfect sense actually, to counter the lie of those who say that the unborn is 'just a mass of formless tissue'. No, these are small human beings, recognizably human, and that lie will no longer be believed after seeing these photos.
"The embryo's aren't tortured to death, but you make it seem so."
- Here you betray your ignorance on the subject. These babies are not administered any type of anesthesia in the womb before being dismembered. And they are capable of feeling pain long before birth. And to avoid damaging the mother, the limbs of the baby has to be ripped off very slowly by the physician. So, imagine having your arm grasped by sharp metal tongs, and then, very slowly, spun until the bone, flesh, and gristle have been so thoroughly twisted that they just snap off, imagine that pain.
"I don't know where you got the pictures from but normally they don't let the embryo or pieces from it pose with a coin after they're done."
- You obviously didn't watch the whole thing then, since it's in the credits. Check AbortionNO.org. They paid an abortionist for access to his aborted remains in his clinic. Basically he'll do anything for money, including murdering babies, and then letting their bodies be photographed.
"abortions most of the time aren't performed to keep the unborn baby from leading a happy life."
- There's a ton of people waiting to adopt, with happy two parent families, so don't give me that. Sex is not something that is inevitable, it is a free choice with its own consequences. Abortion merely shifts those consequences from the mother and father to the baby, with deadly results. I say people should be responsible for their own decisions, not pass them on to their children. How fair would it be if your mother ran up a million dollar debt then passed it on to you. That wouldn't even be as bad as if your mom got the death penalty for some crime and then they executed you instead and let her go. That's the unfairness of abortion, murdering the entire future of our children just to save a couple months of inconvenience before you could adopt it away to a loving home.
"Imagine a girl who got pregnant after a rape. Imagine her raising a kid that wasn't conceived in love and causes her pain of memory everytime she looks at it. A lot of kids nowadays are raised pretty badly, you know."
- So in other words they might have an unhappy life therefore kill them? What about people who are born horribly deformed, should we kill them too? Rape is a terrible thing, but even that does not justify murder of innocents. I say kill the rapist, not the baby!
The only difference between you and an unborn baby is age and time to grow. If a girl and a guy choose to have sex and by that produce a baby, knowing that pregnancy COULD result, then they have chosen to accept that risk of pregnancy, and if it then occurs can be asked by society to bear the consequences of that decision that they freely chose. It is not a disease or parasite that attacks you apart from your own will. You have willed or decided to become pregnant by engaging in activities you know can make you pregnant. And since the result is another human being with a right to its own body, we should ensure that the irresponsibility of mothers and fathers does not result in the death of the only completely innocent persons on the planet: the unborn. Thank you for watching my flash ;D
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